Khamis, 11 Disember 2008

lonely day

problems, problems, problems.
i have to get them out,
if i keep it any longer,
i'm sure to scream and shout.

mother, won't you listen?
something bother me,
go away child, not now,
i'm busy can't you see?

daddy, daddy listen,
cause mother isn't free,
sorry child, but i'm late,
my meeting starts at three.

big brother won't you listen please,
i hope i'm not too late,
yes, you are little brother,
i'm going on a date.

big sister won't you listen please,
cause brother's on a date,
oh sorry, but when i make up,
i just have to concentrate.

problems, problems, problems,
now a new one has cropped up to,
problems are abundant,
but whom to tell them to?



fared@taufik
5 science 10



i leave you with a question to be answered..
this poem created by me a month b4 spm..
i'm tensed on that time..
thanks to Allah.. i have my friends who always support me..
but could i get the same at KMB?

4 ulasan:

  1. tawfik,

    u know u always hav me kan?

    huhu..

    ;)

    BalasPadam
  2. that's a nice poem... love it =)
    so how do u find kmb? can kmb give u friends that help u? like wat hazwan said... u know u have ur classmates to support u k... ;)

    BalasPadam
  3. sori.. trbg komen thru klas nye akaun lak... hehe... (are_fifah)

    BalasPadam
  4. wah wah.nice poem u hav here~huhu!clap2!pandai kamuuu~

    BalasPadam